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Silver Moon

Composed by Denis Toh (Date: 11th June 2005, Time: 4.42pm)

In the velvet sky

Rested the silver moon

In fair and pallid

Moonlight shines from the heaven

Over the water tenderly

Gazing affectionately at the human dwelling

Oh silver moom please stay with me

Tell me where my love is

The maiden with flaxen hair

For I yearn to see her

Under your pale moonlight.

Copyright Protected @ 2005 Denis Toh

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4 Responses to “Silver Moon”

  1. Ms Petaling St Says:
    June 11th, 2005 at 8:52 am

    huhu..sad…but so sweet…the yearning heart is always so lonely..and so sad..but i love it!

  2. KennyF Says:
    June 16th, 2005 at 5:16 pm

    Getting better man! Keep on writing…It’s ok to crib from existing material when you first started out but try to be more original.

    However, it’s good that you’ve developed your own style and you’re so inspired to keep on trying…Now stay away from phrases and imagery that isn’t truly yours (I’ve read them elsewhere so i know they aren’t yours)…BE ORIGINAL!

    Good luck Denis! You’ll make a great poet one day…remember me willya? :)

  3. Muhammad Anas Says:
    June 26th, 2005 at 5:55 am

    A lovely one I should say…
    It is interesting to use the moon as a metaphor in this poem…Being a poet who is really dedicated into the stream of romance, Denis put this one interestingly unique in tone and voice…I’d rather say that the moon can be viewed as a shared dream between not just the man but also the woman…Really a classic…

  4. 'sUdIanA' Says:
    July 1st, 2005 at 10:01 am

    i lurv diz poem d best!!

    well done buddy…

    a real metaphoric poem..

    yeah..love is about waiting sometimes eh?

    but d wait can be blissful at times…heheh..

    keep up d good work ya??

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